I found this poem to be longer than It needed to be. I feel as if it would have been equally successful if a few unnecessary lines were taken out here and there, and the randomness of the rhyming is slightly frustrating. I think the poem would be better without the rhymes. It has a natural flow even with out the rhyming words
With that said, I do actually appreciate and relate to the insight of the poem. I think it's a very relatable insight about insecurities, and the vast difference between how we feel inside and how we look on the outside.
Also, I think the art piece goes well with the poem.
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